I enjoy the way the words make out for the white band that usually goes around that area of the hat, but I think that if you made it a little closer together to make the "band" thicker, that would be great.
I also think it would benefit from a curve, to give the hat a bit more implied dimension. Like if it dipped down like a smile. Nice!
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I enjoy the way the words make out for the white band that usually goes around that area of the hat, but I think that if you made it a little closer together to make the "band" thicker, that would be great.
ReplyDeleteI also think it would benefit from a curve, to give the hat a bit more implied dimension. Like if it dipped down like a smile. Nice!
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